The video consists of one long 17 minute shot with a few graphics. You wanted the truth so I will give it to you. This is boring, boring, boring. Talk for a MAXIMUM of 1 minute, reposition the camera and pick up again where you left off. There are MANY tutorials on YouTube teaching the fine art of editing. Be creative so your viewers don't get bored. Take your camera outside and shoot some B roll stuff of your antenna, your neighborhood, even a dog at play will breakup the monotony of a still shot for 17 minutes. Cut in with video of your radio(s) amplifier etc. etc. Use hand gestures, body movement & be ANIMATED. Speak louder, speak softer. Punctuate an idea by striking your tabletop. Changing your facial expressions is important.
If you are discussing working DX with CW, show yourself actually doing this. Show your antenna rotating if talking about beam headings. If discussing the DX cluster show video of spotted stations roll by on the cluster.
On the plus side your video is well lit & has somewhat decent audio. A little bit of echo but it's passable.
Audio of DX stations is just as important as video. Let the viewer HEAR what flutter sounds like. Let them HEAR what a booming signal sounds like. Let them HEAR what a pileup sounds like.
Remember.............Edit, edit, edit.
Tom KH0/KC0W